100 Word Challenge

 I was packing my essential things because today, I was going camping with my friends. 

After packing my things I hopped into the vehicle. 

While we were inside the car I turned on some music so it didn’t have to get so boring.


When we arrived there I setted my things down and got the camp ready. After that, we went for a walk up north. While I was walking I was slowly getting tired. I was so tired that I collapsed to the ground, feeling the furry grass.

 After getting enough energy I climbed back up and continued walking.

Comments

  1. Anonymous23 June 2021 at 16:58

    Good use of words and a camping trip sounds fun!

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  2. Anonymous23 June 2021 at 17:30

    it sounds great i loved you high lighted the words you needed in the story GREAT JOB!!!!!!!

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  3. Philiprip27 June 2021 at 02:07

    Nice story. You used just enough words to clearly sharewhat was happening. Ka pai.

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