My Journey
IALT record an event in only a few words
IALT choose which words I need to use very carefully


Something you saw
Big waves crashing on the sand
Something you remember
A delicious ice-cream waiting for me
A person you were with
My brother Daniel surfing on ocean
A wonderful imagined thing that never happened
Eating delicious sweets in CANDYLAND
A reason for the journey
To feel the beautiful breezy wind 
Your own six-word sentence

Banana pickle juice flavored milkshake 

Comments

  1. Philiprip28 April 2020 at 19:44

    I like the images you have described for us readers. It paints a very summery, warm picture.

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  2. Anonymous18 March 2021 at 16:58

    to fast you have to slow down

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