100 Word Challenge.


100 Word Challenge…

…suddenly, darkness enveloped the room…


One night there was a girl named Ashley. Ashley was walking home from her meeting. She noticed that someone was following her, but she didn’t want to approach the person because she just couldn’t imagine what would happen. 

MEOW

“Ahh!” Ashley was so frightened, that she dropped her phone and ran away after grabbing her phone. 

She was running away because the suspicious person was chasing after her. 


As Ashley was running away from the person.


Ashley was in a room, she was petrified. Suddenly, darkness enveloped the room, Ashley was never to be seen ever again.


TO BE CONTINUED...

  

Comments

  1. Philiprip12 May 2021 at 02:29

    I was a bit confused when Ashley was running away, and then mysteriously, she was in a room. But there was no explanation about what room, or where the room was, or how she got there. You need to keep thinking about what the readers need to know to be able to follow what you mean at all times.

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